i look at you

English30 lines1 public analyses
Original Poetry
Translation
i look at you
I see you
& you remind me of all the mountains
And you make me think of all the mountains
i haven’t seen or embraced
I haven't visited or hugged
& since you are like every one of us
And because you are like everyone
you rise out of my heart
You emerge from my heart
with the craggy serenity of kilimanjaro
With the rough calmness of Kilimanjaro
enduring like prophecies
Lasting like predictions
peaceful like distances
Calm like faraway places
since you are like all of us
Because you are like all of us
eternal like every river
Timeless like every river
even when the sea claims us
Even when the sea takes us
for me you carry affirmations
For me, you bring affirmations
a sprout in the parch, a mend in the rend
A new growth in the dry, a repair in the tear
water from an ancient well
Water from an old well
& since every one of us
And because everyone
carries the seeds of a storm within him
Has the seeds of a storm inside
since the mountains come to rest
Because the mountains come to rest
in the breast of every one of us
In the heart of everyone
beginning the long journey across the desert
Starting the long journey across the desert
since the forests & the skies & the faces of children
Because the forests and the skies and the faces of children
overflow with the lessons of love
Are full of the lessons of love
for all to learn
For everyone to learn
i will always remember you
I will always remember you
& your face that is the end of all roads
And your face that is the end of all paths
poetry will never travel
Poetry will never go
i will remember you
I will remember you
when i have learned the rustle of rivers
When I have learned the sound of rivers
when i have learned the inconvenient gestures of compassion
When I have learned the awkward acts of kindness
when i have learned to be infinitely present
When I have learned to be completely present
& yet invisible like the sky
And yet unseen like the sky
 

Explanation

This poem is a meditation on the interconnectedness of human experience and the natural world, reflecting on themes of memory, identity, and the enduring presence of nature. The speaker begins by addressing a 'you', who evokes the grandeur and serenity of mountains not yet seen, suggesting an unfulfilled longing or potential within the speaker. The imagery of 'Kilimanjaro' and 'prophecies' evokes a sense of timelessness and endurance, while 'peaceful like distances' suggests a calm acceptance of separation or solitude.

The poem continues to explore the idea of universality, with the 'you' representing all of humanity, eternal like rivers even as life inevitably leads to the sea, a metaphor for death or the unknown. The 'affirmations' carried by this figure are likened to 'a sprout in the parch' and 'water from an ancient well', symbolizing hope and sustenance in barren or difficult times. The poem suggests that within each person lies the potential for both chaos and peace, as 'the seeds of a storm' and the resting mountains coexist within us.

Emotionally, the poem moves from a sense of longing and introspection to a deeper understanding and acceptance of life's journey. The tone is contemplative, with a gentle reverence for the lessons learned from nature and human connection. The speaker's promise to remember the 'face that is the end of all roads' underscores a commitment to personal growth and the pursuit of wisdom.

The use of free verse allows the poem to flow naturally, mirroring the organic themes it explores. Literary devices such as metaphor and imagery are prevalent, with the 'craggy serenity of Kilimanjaro' and 'the rustle of rivers' painting vivid pictures that enhance the poem's reflective quality. The repetition of 'since you are like all of us' reinforces the theme of shared human experience.

Ultimately, the poem speaks to the enduring power of nature and memory, suggesting that true understanding comes from embracing both the visible and invisible aspects of life. It invites readers to consider their place within the broader tapestry of existence, encouraging a deeper connection with the world and each other.

Word Dictionary

Poet & Context

Poet
EraModern

The poet of this work is not identified, suggesting it may be a contemporary or lesser-known writer. The poem reflects modern themes and stylistic elements.


WhenContemporary
WhyThe poem explores universal themes of human connection, nature, and self-discovery, reflecting a modern sensibility towards introspection and existential reflection.
FormFree verse

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