poem name: Triumph of Void.

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Translation
poem name: Triumph of Void.
The old, wrinkled hands of Priam,
Old wrinkled hands of Priam,
Once a king, now just a father
Once a Royal king, came as a father
Searching for his brave son's lifeless body,
Seeking his brave son's empty vessel,
At the feet of the great Hero,
At the foot of the great Hero,
While his son's pride
While the pride of his son,
Had already sunk with Atlantis.
Already sank along with atlantis.
Because Achilles avenged his friend.
For Achilles avenged his old friend.
"Should I kiss or admire,
"Shall I kiss or adore,
The hands that took my love?"
The hands that took my love? "
Asked the old man.
Asked the old man.
Guilt now filled the heart
Guilt now poisoned the heart
Of our Hero, he nodded.
Of our Hero, He nodded.
He hurried to the burial place,
He rushed to the ossuary,
Found his fallen brother's remains
Found his fallen brother's remains
On the blood-covered floor,
Alongside the blood-filled floor,
Where the eagles and crows
Where the eagles and crows
Satisfy their thirst!
Quench their thirst!
What should he give back—
What shall he return
His life?
His life?
His pride?
His pride?
His kindness?
His kindness?
His passion?
His passion?
For everything Achilles wanted to destroy,
For everything, Achilles wished to burn,
Is already turned to ash!
Is already an ash now!
He could only
He couldn't do anything
Watch and cry over
But watch and weep over
His brother's body.
His brother's body.
The river of Styx is already
The river of styx is already
Waiting for our Hero.
Waiting for our Hero.
What kind of pain is this?
What kind of pain is this?
Is this a spell of Apollo?
Is this a sorcery of Apollo?
Or did the goddess
Or did the mother goddess
Athena abandon you?
Athena has forsook you?
For he lost not just his brother,
For he lost not his brother,
But himself to the hands of
But himself to the hands of
The death of the gods!
Death of the gods!
What remains is,
What he left is,
Triumph of
Triumph of Void.
Emptiness.
 

Explanation

The poem 'Triumph of Void' explores the themes of loss, grief, and the emptiness that follows revenge, set against the backdrop of Greek mythology. It opens with the image of Priam, once a king, now a grieving father, seeking the body of his son Hector, who has been killed by Achilles. The poem evokes the legendary fall of Atlantis to symbolize the complete destruction of Hector's pride and legacy.

The narrative shifts to Priam's internal conflict as he questions whether to 'kiss or adore' the hands of Achilles, the man who killed his son. This moment captures the complexity of grief and the struggle between anger and the need for closure. Achilles, filled with guilt, acknowledges Priam's pain and rushes to the ossuary, where he finds the remains of his friend Patroclus, alongside the battlefield's grim remnants.

The emotional arc of the poem is one of profound sorrow and helplessness. Achilles is portrayed as a tragic figure who, despite his might, is powerless to undo the past. The imagery of the 'river of Styx' waiting for him suggests an inevitable journey towards death, underscoring the futility of his vengeance.

The poem employs literary devices such as metaphor and allusion to Greek mythology, enhancing its depth. The 'Triumph of Void' is a powerful oxymoron that encapsulates the poem's central message: the hollow victory of revenge that leaves nothing but emptiness.

Ultimately, the poem reflects on the human condition, the inevitability of loss, and the search for meaning in the aftermath of tragedy. It resonates with the timeless themes of the Trojan War, where heroes and kings are reduced to mere mortals in the face of fate and the gods' whims.

Word Dictionary15

WordIn EnglishPlain (English)Pron.
wrinkledcreasedhaving lines or foldsrin-kuld
vesselcontainera hollow object used to hold somethingves-ul
ossuarybone storagea place where bones are keptos-yoo-er-ee
quenchsatisfyto satisfy thirstkwench
Styxmythical rivera river in Greek mythologystiks
sorcerymagicthe use of magical powerssor-ser-ee
forsookabandonedleft behind or desertedfor-sook
voidemptinessa completely empty spacevoyd
triumphvictorya great success or achievementtry-umph
prideself-respecta feeling of satisfaction from achievementspryd
passionstrong feelingintense emotion or enthusiasmpash-un
goddessfemale deitya female godgod-ess
herobrave persona person admired for couragehee-roh
remainsleftover partswhat is left after other parts are goneri-mayns
eagleslarge birdsbirds of prey with large wingsee-guls

Poet & Context

Poet
EraUnknown

The poet of 'Triumph of Void' is unknown. The poem draws on themes from Greek mythology, involving characters like Priam and Achilles.


WhenUnknown
WhyThe poem explores themes of loss, grief, and the futility of revenge, drawing on the mythological context of the Trojan War.
FormFree verse

Themes & More

griefrevengelossmythologyemptiness
metaphor: The poem uses Atlantis as a metaphor for complete destruction.allusion: References to Greek mythology, such as Priam, Achilles, and the river Styx.oxymoron: 'Triumph of Void' highlights the emptiness of revenge.
poem name: Triumph of Void. by Unknown poet — Poem, Translation & Meaning