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دل کے ویران مکاں میں تری آہٹ ہی نہ تھی

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Original Poetry
Translation
دل کے ویران مکاں میں تری آہٹ ہی نہ تھی
In the empty house of my heart, there was no sound of you
ہم نے خود کو ہی سمجھایا کہ کوئی آیا نہیں
I told myself that no one has come
جاگ اٹھیں تم منتظر اب کیوں ہو
What can I say about the condition I was in?
کیا تمہیں اب بھی وہ صدا یاد نہیں
Before meeting you, what did I not do?
کچھ دن جو ہم ملے، میرا حال تھا بے رنگ
What can I say about someone leaving like this?
پھر بے رنگی کا یہ راز بھی کھلا
In life, I have not experienced such sorrow either
چاہت کے اصولوں میں ہم نے اب تک
Now where will all those memories be, my beloved?
یہ دیکھ لیا کہ کوئی آیا نہیں
In life, there is no reward for your memory
 

Explanation

In this poignant ghazal, Ahmad Faraz explores the themes of love and absence, capturing the deep emotional turmoil of longing. The opening line, "دل کے ویران مکاں میں تری آہٹ ہی نہ تھی," evokes a sense of desolation, suggesting that the speaker's heart is an empty space devoid of the beloved's presence. The self-deception in the second line, "ہم نے خود کو ہی سمجھایا کہ کوئی آیا نہیں," reveals the speaker's attempt to cope with the absence by convincing themselves that no one has come, highlighting the pain of unfulfilled desire.

As the poem progresses, the speaker reflects on their emotional state with the line, "کیا بتائیں کہ ہمیں کس حال میں پایا ہے," indicating a profound sense of loss and confusion. The rhetorical question emphasizes the depth of their feelings and the extent of their longing. The subsequent line, "تجھ سے ملنے سے پہلے میں نے کیا کیا نہیں," suggests that the speaker has made numerous efforts to prepare for this encounter, hinting at a history of yearning.

The emotional arc of the poem transitions from longing to a resigned acceptance of loss. The tone shifts as the speaker acknowledges the impact of separation with, "کیا کہیں کہ کسی کے یوں چھوڑ جانے سے," expressing the pain of abandonment. The line, "زندگی میں ہمیں یوں بھی غم جھیلا نہیں," conveys a sense of disbelief at the depth of sorrow they are experiencing, which feels unprecedented.

In the concluding couplet, the speaker reflects on the fading memories of their beloved, asking, "اب کہاں یاد وہ سب باتیں ہوں گی، جاناں," suggesting that the cherished moments may soon be forgotten. The final line, "زندگی میں تری یاد کا صلہ نہیں," encapsulates the essence of the poem, indicating that there is no reward for the memories of love, reinforcing the theme of loss. Faraz's use of imagery and emotional depth resonates with readers, making this ghazal a powerful exploration of love's complexities and the pain of separation.

Word Dictionary50

WordIn UrduIn EnglishPron.
دلدلthe heartdil
کےکاofke
ویرانخالیabandonedveeraan
مکاںگھرhomemakaan
میںکے اندرinmein
تیریتمہاریyourteri
آہٹآوازnoiseaahat
ہیصرفonlyhi
نہنہیںnotnah
تھیتھاwasthi
ہمہمwehum
نےکیاdidne
خوداپنےselfkhud
کوکوtoko
سمجھایاسمجھایاmade understandsamjhaaya
کہکہthatkeh
کوئیکچھsomeonekoi
آیاآیاcameaaya
نہیںنہیںnonahi
کیاکیاwhatkya
بتائیںبتائیںsaybataain
ہمیںہمیںushumein
کسکونwhichkis
حالحالتstatehaal
پایاپایاfoundpaaya
ہےہےishai
تجھتمyoutujh
سےسےfromse
ملنےملنےto meetmilne
پہلےپہلےbeforepehle
کہیںکہیںsaykahin
کسیکسیanyonekisi
یوںایسےlike thisyun
چھوڑچھوڑto leavechhod
جانےجانےto gojaane
زندگیزندگیexistencezindagi
بھیبھیalsobhi
غمدکھsorrowgham
جھیلابرداشت کیاenduredjheela
ابابnowab
کہاںکہاںwherekahan
یادیادrecollectionyaad
وہوہthatwoh
سبسبallsab
باتیںباتیںtalksbaatein
ہوںہوںamhoon
گیگیwill begi
جاناںمحبوبbelovedjaanaan
کاکاofka
صلہانعامcompensationsila

Poet & Context

Era20th century

Syed Ahmad Shah, known as Ahmad Faraz, was a prominent Pakistani Urdu poet and scriptwriter, born on January 14, 1931. He was known for his poignant poetry that often critiqued political issues and explored themes of love and loss.

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When20th century
WhyThe poem reflects the emotional turmoil of love and absence, a common theme in Ahmad Faraz's work, often inspired by his personal experiences and the socio-political context of his time.
Formghazal

Themes & More

loveabsencelongingsorrow
imagery: vivid descriptions create emotional depthrhetorical questions: emphasize the speaker's feelings of lossrepetition: reinforces the themes of memory and absence
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