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Desire’s Edge

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Desire’s Edge

In the dark, I ask myself;

In the darkness, I ask myself;

What wrong do I commit tonight?

What mistake will I make tonight?

Pride—standing tall, hiding the fire;

Pride—standing tall, hiding the passion;

Or greed—wanting more, fueling desire?

Is it wrath—hot, flaring bright;

Is it anger—hot, burning bright;

Or envy—longing what’s out of sight?

Or jealousy—longing for what’s out of reach?

Could it be lust—this hunger’s grip;

Could it be lust—this strong desire;

A craving I can’t quite slip?

A craving I can’t quite escape?

Your words echo, wrapped in tangled lines;

Your words echo, tangled in complex lines;

A voice that haunts, that intertwines.

And I wonder—what’s the real shame I hide?

Is it pride, or gluttony, or something I confide?

Is it pride, or excess, or something I admit?

Pride whispers, “You’re above this need;”

But lust whispers, “Come feed the feed.”

But lust whispers, “Come satisfy the urge.”

Greed says, “Take what’s not yours;”

While lust beckons, behind locked doors.

While lust calls, behind closed doors.

Wrath—flares in my chest, too hot to bear;

Anger—burns in my chest, too hot to handle;

Or envy—coveting what’s unaware.

Or jealousy—coveting what’s unaware.

But lust—that silent, burning core;

But lust—that quiet, burning core;

Pulls me deeper, craving more.

Pulls me deeper, wanting more.

Sloth—would I rather hide away;

Laziness—would I rather hide away;

Than face the truth I can’t betray?

Than face the truth I can’t deny?

Or gluttony—wanting it all;

Or excess—wanting everything;

Nothing ever feeling small.

So tell me—what wrong am I in?

So tell me—what mistake am I making?

Is it lust, or pride, or chaos within?

Is it lust, or pride, or chaos inside?

The line blurs, the questions grow;

Where does desire end, and darkness show?

Where does desire end, and darkness begin?

Is longing just a seed to grow;

Or a bloom that’s darker, shadowed, slow?

Where does craving cross the line;

And drown me in this silent wine?

In this digital night, I taste the ache;

In this digital night, I feel the ache;

A hunger I can’t fake.

A hunger I can’t pretend.

It whispers softly, “Come closer now;”

Let’s see what’s real beneath the brow.

Let’s see what’s real beneath the surface.

I ask in silence—what’s the real crime?

To desire too much, or hide behind?

To want too much, or hide behind?

Pride? Greed? Wrath? Envy’s gaze?

Pride? Greed? Anger? Jealousy’s look?

Or lust—this fiery maze?

Maybe it’s all blurred in the line;

Between what’s innocent and divine.

A wrong? Or just being human;

A mistake? Or just being human;

Lost in longing, in the quiet, consuming.

Explanation

The poem 'Desire's Edge' explores the complex emotions and moral dilemmas associated with human desires, particularly focusing on the seven deadly sins: pride, greed, wrath, envy, lust, gluttony, and sloth. The speaker reflects on their internal struggles and questions the nature of their desires, pondering whether they are committing a wrong or simply experiencing human emotions. The poem uses vivid imagery and personification to depict each sin as a whispering voice, tempting the speaker to indulge. The recurring theme of blurred lines between right and wrong highlights the difficulty in distinguishing between innocent desires and those that lead to moral downfall. The poem's structure, with its repetitive questioning and introspective tone, emphasizes the speaker's internal conflict and the consuming nature of their longing. The digital night setting adds a modern context, suggesting the pervasive nature of these desires in contemporary life.

Word Dictionary15

Word	In English	Plain (English)	Pron.
commit	do	to perform or carry out	kuh-mit
pride	self-respect	a feeling of self-worth or dignity	prahyd
greed	avarice	wanting more than you need	greed
wrath	anger	intense anger or rage	rath
envy	jealousy	a feeling of wanting what someone else has	en-vee
lust	desire	a strong want for something	lust
gluttony	overeating	eating or drinking too much	glut-n-ee
sloth	laziness	reluctance to work or make an effort	sloth
intertwines	connects	to twist or weave together	in-ter-twahynz
coveting	desiring	to want something very much	kuhv-it-ing
craving	longing	an intense desire for something	kray-ving
betray	deceive	to be disloyal to	bi-trey
consume	devour	to eat or use up	kuhn-soom
divine	heavenly	of or like God	di-vahyn
longing	yearning	a strong desire or wish	lawng-ing

Poet & Context

Poet—

EraContemporary

The poet of 'Desire's Edge' is unknown. The poem explores themes of desire and the seven deadly sins, reflecting on human nature and internal conflict.

WhenContemporary

WhyThe poem 'Desire’s Edge' explores the internal conflict and moral dilemmas associated with human desires and the seven deadly sins. It reflects on the nature of temptation and the blurred lines between right and wrong.

FormFree verse

Themes & More

Themes

DesireMoral conflictSeven deadly sinsHuman nature

Literary devices

Imagery: Vivid descriptions of emotions and desires.Personification: Sins are given human-like voices and actions.Repetition: Repeated questioning to emphasize internal conflict.Metaphor: Desires compared to a fiery maze.

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Desire’s Edge

Original Poetry

Translation

Desire’s Edge

In the dark, I ask myself;

In the darkness, I ask myself;

What wrong do I commit tonight?

What mistake will I make tonight?

Pride—standing tall, hiding the fire;

Pride—standing tall, hiding the passion;

Or greed—wanting more, fueling desire?

Is it wrath—hot, flaring bright;

Is it anger—hot, burning bright;

Or envy—longing what’s out of sight?

Or jealousy—longing for what’s out of reach?

Could it be lust—this hunger’s grip;

Could it be lust—this strong desire;

A craving I can’t quite slip?

A craving I can’t quite escape?

Your words echo, wrapped in tangled lines;

Your words echo, tangled in complex lines;

A voice that haunts, that intertwines.

And I wonder—what’s the real shame I hide?

Is it pride, or gluttony, or something I confide?

Is it pride, or excess, or something I admit?

Pride whispers, “You’re above this need;”

But lust whispers, “Come feed the feed.”

But lust whispers, “Come satisfy the urge.”

Greed says, “Take what’s not yours;”

While lust beckons, behind locked doors.

While lust calls, behind closed doors.

Wrath—flares in my chest, too hot to bear;

Anger—burns in my chest, too hot to handle;

Or envy—coveting what’s unaware.

Or jealousy—coveting what’s unaware.

But lust—that silent, burning core;

But lust—that quiet, burning core;

Pulls me deeper, craving more.

Pulls me deeper, wanting more.

Sloth—would I rather hide away;

Laziness—would I rather hide away;

Than face the truth I can’t betray?

Than face the truth I can’t deny?

Or gluttony—wanting it all;

Or excess—wanting everything;

Nothing ever feeling small.

So tell me—what wrong am I in?

So tell me—what mistake am I making?

Is it lust, or pride, or chaos within?

Is it lust, or pride, or chaos inside?

The line blurs, the questions grow;

Where does desire end, and darkness show?

Where does desire end, and darkness begin?

Is longing just a seed to grow;

Or a bloom that’s darker, shadowed, slow?

Where does craving cross the line;

And drown me in this silent wine?

In this digital night, I taste the ache;

In this digital night, I feel the ache;

A hunger I can’t fake.

A hunger I can’t pretend.

It whispers softly, “Come closer now;”

Let’s see what’s real beneath the brow.

Let’s see what’s real beneath the surface.

I ask in silence—what’s the real crime?

To desire too much, or hide behind?

To want too much, or hide behind?

Pride? Greed? Wrath? Envy’s gaze?

Pride? Greed? Anger? Jealousy’s look?

Or lust—this fiery maze?

Maybe it’s all blurred in the line;

Between what’s innocent and divine.

A wrong? Or just being human;

A mistake? Or just being human;

Lost in longing, in the quiet, consuming.

Explanation

Word Dictionary15

Word	In English	Plain (English)	Pron.
commit	do	to perform or carry out	kuh-mit
pride	self-respect	a feeling of self-worth or dignity	prahyd
greed	avarice	wanting more than you need	greed
wrath	anger	intense anger or rage	rath
envy	jealousy	a feeling of wanting what someone else has	en-vee
lust	desire	a strong want for something	lust
gluttony	overeating	eating or drinking too much	glut-n-ee
sloth	laziness	reluctance to work or make an effort	sloth
intertwines	connects	to twist or weave together	in-ter-twahynz
coveting	desiring	to want something very much	kuhv-it-ing
craving	longing	an intense desire for something	kray-ving
betray	deceive	to be disloyal to	bi-trey
consume	devour	to eat or use up	kuhn-soom
divine	heavenly	of or like God	di-vahyn
longing	yearning	a strong desire or wish	lawng-ing

Poet & Context

Poet—

EraContemporary

The poet of 'Desire's Edge' is unknown. The poem explores themes of desire and the seven deadly sins, reflecting on human nature and internal conflict.

WhenContemporary

FormFree verse

Themes & More

Themes

DesireMoral conflictSeven deadly sinsHuman nature

Literary devices