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She Stood Above Me

Stephen L. HarrisonEnglish57 lines1 public analyses
Original Poetry
Translation
She Stood Above Me
She stood above me.
Stephen L. Harrison
Not in judgment, no,
She stood above me.
but like a mountain peak
Not in judgment, no,
catching the first light.
but like a mountain peak
I felt small then,
catching the first light.
a tiny seed at her root,
I felt small then,
wondering if I'd ever
a tiny seed at her root,
reach for the sun.
wondering if I'd ever
Love.
reach for the sun.
It's the only thing that whispers
Love.
what my heart is shouting.
It's the only thing that whispers
To my friends, the words are rocks,
what my heart is shouting.
too heavy to lift, too rough to share.
To my friends, the words are rocks,
They wouldn't understand
too heavy to lift, too rough to share.
the storms that churn inside,
They wouldn't understand
the thunder that cracks
the storms that churn inside,
without release.
the thunder that cracks
There's no open door for this,
without release.
no place to lay it all down
There's no open door for this,
except in the quiet.
no place to lay it all down
In that sacred space,
except in the quiet.
where I can be just me
In that sacred space,
with you.
where I can be just me
It's not the thunder of God's voice,
with you.
but the soft hum of angels,
It's not the thunder of God's voice,
a heavenly melody
but the soft hum of angels,
that stills the chaos.
a heavenly melody
My eyes, they flicker—
that stills the chaos.
a moth to a flame,
My eyes, they flicker
drawn to that singular heat:
a moth to a flame,
the fire of your presence,
drawn to that singular heat:
the sight of you
the fire of your presence,
that I crave.
the sight of you
A secret beauty,
that I crave.
created by God's own hand,
A secret beauty,
just for us.
created by God's own hand,
A landscape only we can walk.
just for us.
A breath only we can share.
A landscape only we can walk.
Loyalty—
A breath only we can share.
love assured—
Loyalty
holds strong.
love assured
It endures.
holds strong.
As long as you are there—
It endures.
towering,
As long as you are there
a beacon,
towering,
a safe harbour above me—
a beacon,
I ask for no refraction,
a safe harbour above me
no bending of the light
I ask for no refraction,
to make this love
no bending of the light
appear as something else.
to make this love
I ask only
appear as something else.
that the light stay on,
I ask only
that I may see us as we are—
that the light stay on,
and that the curves above me
that I may see us as we are
remain.
and that the curves above me
remain.
 

Explanation

In Stephen L. Harrison's poem "She Stood Above Me," the speaker reflects on a profound emotional connection with a beloved figure, depicted as a towering presence akin to a mountain peak. The opening lines, "She stood above me. / Not in judgment, no, / but like a mountain peak / catching the first light," establish a tone of reverence and admiration, suggesting that the speaker feels both small and uplifted in her presence. This imagery evokes feelings of vulnerability and aspiration, as the speaker likens himself to "a tiny seed at her root," yearning to grow and reach for the sun.

The poem shifts to explore the complexities of love, where the speaker describes love as a whisper amidst the louder shouts of his heart. The metaphor of words as "rocks, / too heavy to lift, too rough to share" illustrates the struggle to communicate deep emotions to friends who may not understand the internal turmoil symbolized by "the storms that churn inside." This emotional arc conveys a sense of isolation, emphasizing the need for a safe space where the speaker can authentically express himself.

As the poem progresses, the tone evolves from longing to a sense of solace found in the quiet moments shared with the beloved. The line "It's not the thunder of God's voice, / but the soft hum of angels" contrasts the chaos of external noise with the peace found in love, suggesting that true connection brings tranquility. The imagery of a moth drawn to a flame encapsulates the irresistible attraction the speaker feels, highlighting the intensity of desire and the beauty of the beloved.

The poem culminates in a declaration of loyalty and enduring love, reinforced by the metaphor of the beloved as a "beacon" and "a safe harbour above me." Harrison's use of light imagery throughout the poem signifies clarity and truth in their relationship. The speaker's request for the light to remain on symbolizes a desire for transparency and authenticity in love, emphasizing the importance of seeing each other as they truly are. Ultimately, the poem celebrates the sacredness of love, the beauty of shared experiences, and the strength found in loyalty, making it a poignant reflection on human connection.

Word Dictionary77

WordIn EnglishPlain (English)Pron.
stoodremained in a positionto be in an upright positionstood
judgmentevaluation or opinionthe act of forming an opinion about someone or somethingjudgment
mountainlarge natural elevationa large landform that rises prominently above its surroundingsmountain
peaktop pointthe highest point of somethingpeak
catchinggrabbing or seizingto capture or take hold of somethingcatching
lightbrightnessthe natural agent that stimulates sight and makes things visiblelight
feltexperienced an emotionto experience a sensation or emotionfelt
smalllittle in sizenot large; of a size that is less than normalsmall
tinyvery smallextremely small in sizetiny
seedplant reproductive partthe part of a plant that can grow into a new plantseed
wonderingthinking about something with curiosityto think about something with curiosity or to be uncertainwondering
reachextend towardsto stretch out or extend towards somethingreach
sunthe star at the center of our solar systemthe luminous celestial body that provides light and warmth to the Earthsun
whispersspeaks softlyto speak very softly or quietlywhispers
shoutingcrying out loudlyto call out or speak loudlyshouting
friendscompanions or alliespeople with whom one has a bond of mutual affectionfriends
rockssolid mineral materialhard substances that are found on the Earth's surfacerocks
heavyhaving great weightweighing a lot; difficult to liftheavy
roughnot smoothhaving an uneven or irregular surfacerough
shareto divide and distributeto give a portion of something to othersshare
understandto grasp the meaningto comprehend or grasp the significance of somethingunderstand
stormsviolent weather conditionsdisturbances in the atmosphere that can cause strong winds and rainstorms
churnto mix vigorouslyto stir or agitate intenselychurn
thunderloud sound from lightningthe sound that follows lightning during a stormthunder
cracksbreaks with a sharp noiseto break or make a sudden sharp noisecracks
releaseto set freeto allow something to be free or to escaperelease
opennot closednot shut; allowing accessopen
doorentrywaya movable barrier that allows entry or exitdoor
placelocationa particular position or areaplace
layto put downto place something down in a flat positionlay
quietcalm and silentmaking little or no noisequiet
sacredholy or reveredregarded with reverence and respectsacred
spacearea or expansea continuous area or expanse that is free or unoccupiedspace
justonlymerely; no more thanjust
God'sof Godbelonging to or associated with GodGod's
voicesound produced by a personthe sound produced by the vocal cordsvoice
humlow continuous sounda steady, low sound made by a person or thinghum
angelsspiritual beingsmessengers of God in various religious traditionsangels
melodymusical tunea sequence of notes that is musically satisfyingmelody
stillscalms or makes quietto make something calm or quietstills
chaoscomplete disordera state of utter confusion or disorderchaos
eyesorgans of sightthe organs that allow us to seeeyes
flickerto shine unsteadilyto burn or shine with a wavering lightflicker
mothinsect attracted to lighta type of insect that is attracted to lightmoth
flamevisible part of firethe visible, gaseous part of a fireflame
drawnpulled towardsto be attracted or pulled towards somethingdrawn
singularunique or one of a kindbeing the only one of its kindsingular
heatwarmththe quality of being hotheat
firecombustion that produces heat and lightthe process of combustion that produces flamesfire
presencestate of being presentthe state of being in a particular placepresence
sightability to seethe ability to see; visionsight
craveto desire intenselyto have an intense desire for somethingcrave
secretsomething hiddensomething that is kept unknown or concealedsecret
beautypleasing qualitythe quality of being pleasing or attractivebeauty
createdmade or formedto bring something into existencecreated
landscapevisible land areathe visible features of an area of landlandscape
walkto move on footto move by putting one foot in front of the otherwalk
breathair taken in or expelledthe air that is inhaled or exhaledbreath
Loyaltyfaithfulnessthe quality of being loyal or faithfulLoyalty
assuredguaranteed or certainto be certain or confident about somethingassured
holdsmaintains or keepsto have or keep in a particular positionholds
strongpowerful or sturdyhaving great physical power or strengthstrong
endureslasts over timeto continue to exist or last despite difficultiesendures
therein that placein or at that placethere
toweringvery tallextremely tall or hightowering
beaconsignal lighta guiding or warning signalbeacon
safeprotected from harmnot in danger; securesafe
harboursheltered porta place on the coast where vessels may find shelterharbour
askto requestto make a request or inquiryask
refractionbending of lightthe bending of light as it passes from one medium to anotherrefraction
bendingcurving or shapingto shape or curve somethingbending
appearto seem or lookto become visible or noticeableappear
somethingan unspecified thinga thing that is not specifically identifiedsomething
elseother than thisin addition to or different from what has been mentionedelse
stayto remain in placeto continue to be in a specified state or conditionstay
seeto perceive with the eyesto perceive or detect with the eyessee
curvesbends or arcsto have a rounded shapecurves

Poet & Context

EraContemporary

Stephen L. Harrison is a contemporary poet known for exploring themes of love, nature, and personal introspection in his work.


WhenContemporary period, specific date unknown
WhyThe poem expresses deep feelings of love and introspection, reflecting on personal experiences and emotions.
FormFree verse

Themes & More

LoveIntrospectionConnection
metaphor: comparing the beloved to a mountain peak emphasizes her towering presence and the speaker's feelings of smallness and aweimagery: vivid descriptions create a sensory experience, such as "a moth to a flame" illustrating desirecontrast: the difference between the chaos of storms and the calm of love highlights the peace found in connection