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In search of Eden.

English15 lines1 public analyses
Original Poetry
Translation
In search of Eden.
Looking for a perfect place.
Lonely traveller
A lonely traveler
Walking upon dunes
Walking on sand hills
Outstretched to the east.
Reaching eastward.
You roam the desert of lost time.
You wander the desert of forgotten time.
Great fire in the sky
A big sun in the sky
Burning liquid gold
Burning like melted gold
Molten on your flesh.
Melting on your skin.
You lay in homage to its blinding light.
You lie down in respect to its very bright light.
Echos of paradise
Repeats of paradise
Trees that once bore fruit
Trees that once gave fruit
Birds that once sang. Silenced
Birds that once sang. Now quiet
The garden of Eden has turned to dust.
The Garden of Eden has turned to dust.
Poor traveller. You could not prevent this,
Poor traveler. You couldn't stop this,
Ignorant in your search for knowledge
Unaware in your search for knowledge
 

Explanation

This poem uses the metaphor of a traveler searching for the Garden of Eden to explore themes of loss and the passage of time. The traveler, described as lonely and wandering through a desert, symbolizes humanity's quest for knowledge and the inevitable consequences of that pursuit. The 'great fire in the sky' and 'burning liquid gold' evoke the harshness of the sun, representing the challenges faced in this journey. The poem reflects on the myth of Eden, suggesting that the paradise once full of life is now barren, a consequence of human actions. The traveler, despite their efforts, is portrayed as ignorant of the true cost of seeking knowledge, highlighting a sense of regret and inevitability. The poem's imagery of a desert and echoes of a lost paradise create a vivid picture of desolation and nostalgia for what once was.

Word Dictionary11

WordIn EnglishPlain (English)Pron.
Edenparadise, a perfect placeA biblical paradise described as the original home of Adam and Eve.ee-den
travellersomeone who travelsA person who is on a journey.trav-uh-ler
dunessand hillsMounds of sand formed by the wind, often found in deserts.dyoonz
outstretchedextendedStretched out to full length.out-stretchd
roamwanderTo move around without a fixed course or destination.rohm
moltenmeltedMade liquid by heat.mohl-ten
homagerespectA special honor or respect shown publicly.hahm-ij
blindingdazzlingExtremely bright or intense.blind-ing
echoesrepeatsSounds that are reflected off a surface and heard again.ek-ohz
paradiseheavenA place of extreme beauty, delight, or happiness.par-a-dice
ignorantunawareLacking knowledge or awareness.ig-nor-ant

Poet & Context

Poet
EraContemporary

The poet of this piece is unknown, suggesting it may be a contemporary work or an unpublished poem. The themes and style suggest a modern reflection on ancient myths.


WhenUnknown, likely contemporary
WhyThe poem reflects on the myth of the Garden of Eden, exploring themes of loss, the passage of time, and the quest for knowledge. It uses the metaphor of a traveler in a desert to symbolize the human journey and the consequences of seeking knowledge.
FormFree verse

Themes & More

LossQuest for KnowledgeDesolationNostalgia
Metaphor: The traveler symbolizes humanity's quest for knowledge.Imagery: Vivid descriptions of the desert and sun create a sense of harshness and desolation.Personification: The sun is described as 'burning liquid gold' and 'molten on your flesh'.Allusion: References to the Garden of Eden evoke biblical themes of paradise lost.