Analisi poetica

I enjoy prose poetry, My poems don't have much rhythm! Because adding rhythm makes the words feel fake. Like too much makeup makes a woman look like a ghost instead of pretty! But what about the metaphors in my poems? Aren't they fake? I didn't write them! My soul did, There are many things that seem fake to me But true to my soul. Like I couldn't even chat a bit with my beloved And she created the Mahabharata! Yet my praise seems fake Like how Christians overly praise the Messiah, I don't do that. Many traditional poets put the beloved in God's place, I haven't done that! Finally, a request to God, If God doesn't give heaven, give her And if heaven is given, let her be inside it!