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A Way to Grace

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A Way to Grace

Stay wary of our wings When we near the heat of the sun For our bodies will rupture And we'll both boil away

No friction can hold us We'll sojourn in the cosmic rays And stellar we will voyage As we ascend and escape

Close your eyes As we travel the distant space Memorize All the scenes that have taken place

The shadows that bind you Don't show traces of long regret Your vessel has crumbled You're beginning to drift away

The pressure will crush you Purple thaw to your wanderlust As the black hole pulls harder Now unmoored to be ripped apart

Close your eyes As we travel the distant space Memorize All the scenes that have taken place

In the dead stars he's waiting Many times you have questioned his eyes With red robes, he has taken his pick Finally he'll be claiming his prize

Rescue me I will never forget your face Pray for me And we'll both find a way to grace

Just close your eyes And in time we may When we find each other again We'll both find a way to grace

Traduction

Be careful of our wings Stay wary of our wings When we get close to the sun's heat For our bodies will break

And we'll both evaporate Nothing can stop us We'll travel in the cosmic rays And we'll journey among the stars

As we rise and escape Close your eyes As we move through distant space Remember

All the events that have happened The shadows that hold you Don't show signs of long regret Your ship has fallen apart

You're starting to drift away The pressure will crush you Purple melts into your desire to explore As the black hole pulls harder

Now free to be torn apart Close your eyes As we move through distant space Remember

All the events that have happened In the dead stars he's waiting You've often questioned his eyes Wearing red robes, he has chosen

Finally, he'll take his prize Save me I will always remember your face Pray for me

And we'll both find a path to grace Just close your eyes And maybe in time When we meet again