Our journey now memory

English13 lines1 public analyses
Original Poetry
Translation
Our journey now memory
Our journey is now just a memory
Passes through the string of heart
It moves through the heart's string
Presence of you then gaveth to me a breathless breath
Your presence gave me a breathless feeling
Waiting for your nesh lips on mine
Waiting for your soft lips on mine
Your ferocious act of courage delirious to my heart
Your bold act of courage made my heart dizzy
Can't forget your clown voice to others sounding music to my hearing
I can't forget your silly voice, which sounds like music to me
Giving to my foot a dance and lips a smile
It makes my feet dance and my lips smile
I named you a mistake, my regret and pain
I called you a mistake, my regret and pain
If wishes were horses,
If wishes could come true,
I wanted memories of you erase, turning back time to day we met and might have met stopping our meeting
I wanted to erase memories of you, turn back time to the day we met and maybe stop us from meeting
Not anymore though, now I realize memories of you were like booklet to perfect my present
But not anymore, now I see memories of you as a guide to improve my present
You were never a mistake
You were never a mistake
But a path I had pass
But a path I had to take
 

Explanation

This poem reflects on a past relationship, exploring themes of love, regret, and personal growth. It begins by reminiscing about the journey shared with a loved one, now reduced to a memory. The poet describes the intense emotions experienced during the relationship, such as the breathless excitement and the joy brought by the partner's presence. Despite initially considering the relationship a mistake, the poet realizes that these memories have contributed to personal growth and understanding. The poem concludes with the acknowledgment that the relationship was not a mistake but a necessary path in life's journey. The use of vivid imagery, such as 'nesh lips' and 'clown voice,' adds depth to the emotional experience, while the free verse form allows for a natural, flowing expression of thoughts and feelings.

Word Dictionary9

WordIn EnglishPlain (English)Pron.
gavethgavegavegay-veth
neshsoftsoftnesh
deliriousecstaticvery happyde-lir-ee-us
ferociousfiercevery strongfe-ro-shus
clownsillygoofyklown
regretsorrowsadnessre-gret
eraseremovewipe outee-race
bookletguidepamphletbook-let
pathwayroadpath

Poet & Context

Poet
EraContemporary

The poet of this piece is unknown. The poem reflects contemporary themes of love, memory, and personal growth.


WhenContemporary
WhyThe poem explores themes of love, regret, and personal growth. It reflects on the complexities of relationships and the way past experiences shape one's present.
FormFree verse

Themes & More

LoveRegretPersonal Growth
Imagery: Vivid descriptions like 'nesh lips' and 'clown voice' create strong visual and auditory images.Metaphor: The journey is compared to a memory, and memories are likened to a booklet guiding the present.Personification: The 'string of heart' suggests emotional connection.Alliteration: Repeated sounds in 'breathless breath' and 'ferocious act of courage' enhance rhythm.