पिता झाड़-झंखाड़, घाटियों और पत्थरों से भरे

Original Poetry
Translation
पिता झाड़-झंखाड़, घाटियों और पत्थरों से भरे
Father was like a barren field filled with bushes, valleys, and stones.
चटियल मैदान थे
पिता सागौन, शीशम, बबूल, तेंदुओं और हिरनों से भरे
Father was like a wild forest filled with teak, sheesham, acacia, leopards, and deer.
बीहड़ थे
बचपन में अक्सर
As a child, I often climbed a high mound
किसी ऊँचे टीले पर चढ़ कर
मैं आस-पास के गाँवों में
and would shout out to the nearby villages.
ललकार दिया करता था
नाके के पार
Beyond the checkpoint,
शहर तक में
Even in the city,
पिता का रोब था
Father's presence was felt.
एक-एक इमारत पर
On every building,
उनकी कन्नियाँ सरकी थीं
His tools had been used.
एक-एक दीवार पर
On every wall,
उनकी उँगलियों के निशान थे
His fingerprints were visible.
हर दरवाज़े की काठ पर
On the wood of every door,
उनका रंदा चला था
His plane had been used.
नाके के इस पार
Beyond the checkpoint,
जहाँ से गाँव की वीरानगी शुरू होती है
Where the village's emptiness begins,
हर खेत की कठोर छाती पर
On every field's hard surface,
पिता अपनी कुदाल
Father had dug with his hoe.
धँसा गए थे
हल की हर मूठ पर
On every plow handle,
उनकी घट्ठेदार हथेलियों की छाप थी
His rough hands left their mark.
हर गरियार बैल के पुट्ठों पर
On the backs of every plowing bull,
उनके डंडे के दाग थे...
His stick's marks were visible...
बचपन में
As a child,
पिता के कंधे पर बैठ कर
Sitting on father's shoulders,
मैं बाज़ार घूमने जाता था
I would go to the market.
पिता पहाड़ की तरह
Father was like a mountain,
चलते भीड़ की तरह
Walking like a crowd,
उनके कंधे पर मैं
On his shoulders, I
जंगली तोते की तरह बैठा रहता
sat like a wild parrot.
बाद में पिता
Later, father
ग़ायब हो गए
vanished.
कहते हैं खेल, कुदाल,
They say games, hoes,
बैल, इमारतें, ईंटे, दरवाज़े, बाज़ार
Bulls, buildings, bricks, doors, markets
उन्हें पचा गए
consumed him.
मुझे लगता है
I feel
उस चटियल मैदान
inside that barren field
के भीतर (जो पिता थे)
(which was father)
ज़मीन की दूसरी-तीसरी परतों में
in the deeper layers of the earth.
सरकता हुआ कोई
Something moist was seeping,
नम सोता भी था
जो मेहनत करते
which, besides father's hardworking body,
पिता की देह के अलावा
कभी-कभी मेरी आँखों से भी
sometimes even from my eyes
रिसने लगता था
would start to leak.
 

Explanation

This poem by Dhirendra Asthana is a poignant reflection on the presence and influence of a father. The poet uses vivid imagery to describe the father as a part of the natural and built environment, symbolizing his strength, labor, and legacy. The father is depicted as a robust figure whose presence is felt in the fields, buildings, and even in the smallest details of the landscape. The imagery of tools and labor signifies the father's hard work and dedication. As the poem progresses, the father becomes a part of the earth itself, suggesting his enduring impact and the deep connection between the father and the land. The poem also touches on themes of memory and loss, as the father eventually 'disappears,' leaving behind only traces of his existence. The poet's childhood memories of sitting on his father's shoulders and feeling secure and elevated are contrasted with the later absence, creating a sense of longing and nostalgia. This poem beautifully captures the essence of a father's role and the indelible mark they leave on their children and surroundings.

Word Dictionary73

WordIn HindiIn EnglishPron.
पिताबापfatherpitaa
झाड़-झंखाड़झाड़ियाँshrubsjhaad-jhankhaar
घाटियोंदर्रोंvalleysghaatiyon
पत्थरोंचट्टानोंstonespattharon
चटियलसूखाbarrenchatiyal
मैदानखेतfieldmaidaan
सागौनएक प्रकार की लकड़ीteaksaagoun
शीशमएक प्रकार की लकड़ीa type of woodsheesham
बबूलकाँटेदार पेड़acaciababool
तेंदुओंजंगली जानवरleopardstenduo
हिरनोंहरिणdeerhirnon
बीहड़जंगलwildernessbeehad
बचपनबचपन का समयchildhoodbachpan
अक्सरप्रायःoftenaksar
ऊँचेऊपरhighoonche
टीलेछोटे पहाड़moundsteele
चढ़चढ़ाईclimbchadh
आस-पासनज़दीकsurroundingaas-paas
गाँवोंगाँवvillagesgaonon
ललकारचुनौतीchallengelalkaar
नाकेचौकीcheckpointnaake
शहरनगरcityshahar
रोबप्रभावinfluencerob
इमारतभवनbuildingimaarat
कन्नियाँऔज़ारtoolskanniyan
सरकीहिलीmovedsarki
दीवारभित्तिwalldeewaar
उँगलियोंअंगुलियाँfingersungliyon
निशानचिन्हmarksnishaan
दरवाज़ेद्वारdoorsdarwaaze
काठलकड़ीwoodkaath
रंदालकड़ी का औज़ारplaneranda
वीरानगीसूनाdesolationveeraangi
खेतखेतfarmlandkhet
कठोरसख्तhardkathor
छातीसीनाchestchaati
कुदालखुदाई का औज़ारhoekudaal
धँसाडुबोयाsunkdhansa
हलकृषि का औज़ारplowhal
मूठहैंडलhandlemooth
घट्ठेदारमज़बूतcallousedghaththedaar
हथेलियोंहाथ की हथेलियाँpalmshatheliyon
छापनिशानimprintchaap
गरियारमोटाplowinggariyar
बैलबैलbullbail
पुट्ठोंपीठbacksputthon
डंडेछड़ीstickdande
दागनिशानmarksdaag
कंधेकंधाshoulderskandhe
बाज़ारमंडीmarketbaazaar
पहाड़पर्वतmountainpahaad
भीड़जनसमूहcrowdbheed
जंगलीवन्यwildjangli
तोतेपक्षीparrottote
ग़ायबलुप्तdisappearedghaayab
खेलखेलgameskhel
इमारतेंभवनbuildingsimaaraten
ईंटेईंटbrickseente
पचासमाहितswallowedpacha
भीतरअंदरinsidebheetar
ज़मीनधरतीearthzameen
दूसरीअन्यseconddoosri
तीसरीतीसराthirdteesri
परतोंस्तरlayersparaton
सरकताफिसलताslippingsarakta
नमगीलाmoistnam
सोताझरनाspringsota
मेहनतपरिश्रमhard workmehnat
देहशरीरbodydeh
अलावासिवायbesidesalaawa
कभी-कभीसमय-समय परsometimeskabhi-kabhi
आँखोंनेत्रeyesaankhon
रिसनेटपकनेseeprisne

Poet & Context

EraModern Hindi Literature

Dhirendra Asthana is a contemporary Hindi writer known for his evocative poetry and stories that often explore themes of family, memory, and identity. His works are part of modern Hindi literature.

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WhenModern era
WhyThe poem reflects on the profound impact of a father figure, using vivid imagery of nature and labor to convey the father's presence and influence. It explores themes of memory, loss, and the enduring legacy of parental figures.
FormFree Verse

Themes & More

FatherhoodLegacyMemoryNatureLabor
Imagery: Vivid descriptions of nature and labor to depict the father's presence.Metaphor: The father is compared to natural elements and landscapes.Personification: Tools and elements of nature are given human-like qualities.Symbolism: The father's influence is symbolized through marks on buildings and fields.Contrast: Childhood memories are contrasted with the father's later absence.
पिता झाड़-झंखाड़, घाटियों और पत्थरों से भरे by धीरेंद्र अस्थाना — Poem, Translation & Meaning