Heavens declared in the midnight saying

English14 lines1 public analyses
Original Poetry
Translation
Heavens declared in the midnight saying
The skies spoke at midnight, saying
"Thou have sinned,indeed thou have sinned!"
"You have done wrong, indeed you have done wrong!"
I have lied with a prostitute,
I have been with a sex worker,
whose name is sin!
whose name is wrongdoing!
Yes I am a sinner,there is no chance
Yes, I am guilty, there is no way
to deny this.
to deny this.
I have heard that people are condemning
I have heard that people are blaming
me for sinning.
me for my actions.
But o sons of man,who can say that
But oh, people, who can say that
"I am not a sinner" except the holy ones.
"I am not guilty" except the truly pure.
I have answered my own soul
I have spoken to my own spirit
That I admit that I have sinned against God,
That I admit that I have done wrong against God,
but not more than the sins I have
but not more than the wrongs I have
committed against myself!
committed against myself!
 

Explanation

The poem is a candid confession of sin and guilt. It begins with a dramatic declaration from the heavens, accusing the speaker of sinning. The speaker admits to engaging in sinful behavior, metaphorically described as lying with a prostitute named 'sin.' This act is emblematic of moral transgression. The speaker acknowledges being a sinner and accepts the judgment of others. However, the poem shifts to a broader reflection on human nature, questioning who among men can truly claim to be without sin, except for the holy. The speaker's introspection leads to an admission of sinning against God, but with a poignant realization that the greatest sins are those committed against oneself. This highlights a theme of self-betrayal and internal conflict, suggesting that personal integrity and self-respect are deeply intertwined with one's moral compass. The poem uses religious imagery and personal reflection to explore themes of guilt, judgment, and redemption.

Word Dictionary11

WordIn EnglishPlain (English)Pron.
Heavensskies, celestial realmthe sky or universe, often seen as a divine or spiritual realmhev-uhns
declaredannounced, proclaimedto announce something clearly and publiclydih-klaerd
midnight12 o'clock at nightthe middle of the night; 12 AMmid-nahyt
sinneddone wrong, committed a sinto have committed an act that is considered morally wrongsind
prostitutesex workera person who engages in sexual activity for paymentpros-ti-toot
condemningcriticizing, blamingexpressing strong disapproval or judgmentkuhn-dem-ing
sons of manhumans, peoplea term referring to human beingssuhnz uhv man
holysacred, divinerelated to a deity or religious sanctityhoh-lee
soulspirit, inner selfthe spiritual or immaterial part of a personsohl
admitconfess, acknowledgeto acknowledge or confess to somethinguhd-mit
committeddone, carried outto have performed or perpetrated an actkuh-mit-id

Poet & Context

Poet
EraUnknown

The poet of this work is not identified. It appears to be a contemporary or lesser-known piece without a widely recognized author.


WhenUnknown
WhyThe poem reflects on themes of sin, guilt, and self-reflection. It explores the concept of sin both in a religious and personal context, suggesting a struggle with moral and ethical dilemmas.
FormFree verse

Themes & More

singuiltself-reflectionjudgmentredemption
Metaphor: 'I have lied with a prostitute, whose name is sin!' equates sinning with lying with a prostitute.Personification: 'Heavens declared' gives human-like qualities to the heavens.Repetition: 'Thou have sinned, indeed thou have sinned!' emphasizes the act of sinning.Allusion: References to religious and moral concepts of sin and holiness.