Promised Staples

English47 lines1 public analyses
Original Poetry
Translation
The trees sing in the spring breeze,
The trees sing in the gentle spring wind,
paths cross, and they fall like teens,
paths meet, and they fall like teenagers,
moons pass, someone's on their knee.
moons go by, someone proposes.
One is woken up by breakfast,
One wakes up to breakfast,
one gets a bouquet of irises.
another gets a bunch of irises.
Years proceed, and that's how it's been,
Years go by, and that's how it's been,
Then one day it just happened.
Then suddenly it changed.
The vase is empty, no breakfast in bed.
The vase is empty, no breakfast in bed.
No one delivers the promised staples,
No one brings the promised basics,
silence thickens the air at the table.
silence fills the air at the table.
Still fallen like teens from when they crossed paths,
Still fallen like teenagers from when they met,
but now that one knee seems like the wrong track.
but now that proposal seems wrong.
No one delivers the promised staples,
No one brings the promised basics,
irises don't grow on roadsides,
irises don't grow by the road,
it's easy to make your own waffles,
it's easy to make your own waffles,
moons pass, and rings are thrown in fires.
moons go by, and rings are thrown into fires.
Table for one within tables of two,
A table for one among tables for two,
Side eyes and scoffs all around the room.
Judgmental looks and whispers fill the room.
A red-dressed brunette asks when they'll arrive,
A woman in red asks when they'll arrive,
lone dinner's not proper for Friday nights.
eating alone isn't right for Friday nights.
Some suit asks the big question,
Someone in a suit asks the big question,
of course they'd say yes to heaven.
naturally, they'd say yes to happiness.
Tonight's the start of the honeymoon phase,
Tonight starts the honeymoon phase,
One morning, that lavender haze will fade.
One day, that dreamy feeling will fade.
No one out there gave birth to your soulmate.
No one was born as your perfect partner.
That's a frame you create fresh from the grain.
That's something you create from scratch.
Some friends do kiss, skin to skin, in one bed,
Some friends share a bed,
a picnic with your grandparents instead.
or have a picnic with grandparents instead.
A yes to a ring is not ultimate.
Saying yes to a ring isn't everything.
Wear that backless top for your bestie,
Wear that revealing top for your friend,
split the rent with your favourite cousin.
share rent with your favorite cousin.
I'd pick my siblings over a wedding.
I'd choose my siblings over a wedding.
I crave to craft bouquets,
I want to make bouquets,
for those my cheeks flush pink.
for those who make me blush.
If they refuse a new page,
If they don't want to start fresh,
well, then I'm bolting.
then I'm leaving.
My long-distance friend,
My faraway friend,
I love her to death,
I love her dearly,
we both take our time,
we both take our time,
checking if the other's still alive.
making sure the other is okay.
So, future 4 am texts,
So, future late-night texts,
better have patience for breakfast.
be patient for breakfast.
Delivering staples, and soulmates,
Bringing basics and soulmates,
both skunk musk that envelop romance.
both are illusions that surround romance.
My crush may never gleam at my bouquet,
My crush may never notice my bouquet,
but adorn a few for my aunts, I can.
but I can make some for my aunts.
Might finally get one for myself.
I might finally get one for myself.
 

Explanation

The poem 'Promised Staples' explores the complexities of modern relationships and societal expectations. Through a series of vivid images, it contrasts the idealized notions of romance with the realities of personal fulfillment. The opening lines depict a scene of youthful love and promise, with 'trees sing in the spring breeze' and 'paths cross, and they fall like teens,' suggesting the fleeting nature of initial attraction. However, as time progresses, the poem reveals a shift in perspective, where 'the vase is empty, no breakfast in bed,' symbolizing the loss of those early promises.

The poem's emotional arc moves from hopeful beginnings to a realization of independence and self-reliance. The repeated refrain 'No one delivers the promised staples' underscores the theme of unmet expectations and the necessity of self-sufficiency. The imagery of 'moons pass, and rings are thrown in fires' highlights the transience of traditional romantic commitments, suggesting that true fulfillment may lie outside conventional norms.

The tone of the poem is reflective and somewhat defiant, as the speaker challenges societal conventions. The use of free verse allows for a fluid exploration of ideas, with the absence of a strict rhyme scheme mirroring the poem's theme of breaking free from traditional constraints. Literary devices such as metaphor and repetition emphasize the contrast between societal expectations and personal desires.

Ultimately, 'Promised Staples' suggests that the search for a soulmate is a personal journey, not a predetermined path. The poem encourages readers to find fulfillment in diverse relationships and experiences, rather than adhering to societal pressures. It reflects a contemporary understanding of love and companionship, where personal growth and independence are valued alongside traditional commitments.

Word Dictionary10

WordIn EnglishPlain (English)Pron.
staplesessentialsnecessary itemsstey-puhls
irisesflowersspecific type of flowerahy-ris-iz
lavenderpale purplelight purplelav-uhn-der
soulmateperfect partnerperfect matchsohl-meyt
bouquetbunch of flowersbunch of flowersboo-kay
honeymoonearly marriage phasefirst phase of marriagehuhn-ee-moon
brunettedark-haired womanwoman with dark hairbroo-net
boltingrunning awayrunning offbohl-ting
muskstrong smellstrong scentmuhsk
envelopsurroundcompletely coveren-vel-uhp

Poet & Context

Poet
EraContemporary

The poet of 'Promised Staples' is unknown. This poem appears to be a contemporary work, reflecting modern themes of love, relationships, and societal expectations.


WhenContemporary
WhyThe poem explores modern relationships, societal expectations, and the personal journey of finding fulfillment beyond traditional norms.
FormFree verse

Themes & More

modern relationshipssocietal expectationsself-reliancepersonal fulfillment
metaphor: 'trees sing in the spring breeze' symbolizes the liveliness of youthful loverepetition: 'No one delivers the promised staples' emphasizes unmet expectationsimagery: 'moons pass, and rings are thrown in fires' evokes the transience of commitments