Elegy V: His Picture

John DonneEnglish20 lines1 public analyses
Original Poetry
Translation
Here take my picture; though I bid farewell
Here, take my picture; even though I say goodbye
Thine, in my heart, where my soul dwells, shall dwell.
Yours will remain in my heart, where my soul lives.
'Tis like me now, but I dead, 'twill be more
It looks like me now, but when I'm dead, it will be more
When we are shadows both, than 'twas before.
When we are both just shadows, more than it was before.
When weather-beaten I come back, my hand
When I return weathered, my hand
Perhaps with rude oars torn, or sun beams tann'd,
Maybe torn by rough oars, or tanned by the sun,
My face and breast of haircloth, and my head
My face and chest covered in rough cloth, and my head
With care's rash sudden storms being o'erspread,
With sudden storms of worry all over it,
My body'a sack of bones, broken within,
My body a sack of bones, broken inside,
And powder's blue stains scatter'd on my skin;
And blue stains from powder scattered on my skin;
If rival fools tax thee to'have lov'd a man
If foolish rivals criticize you for loving a man
So foul and coarse as, oh, I may seem then,
So ugly and coarse as I may seem then,
This shall say what I was, and thou shalt say,
This will show what I was, and you will say,
"Do his hurts reach me? doth my worth decay?
"Do his wounds affect me? Does my value decrease?
Or do they reach his judging mind, that he
Or do they affect his judgment, that he
Should now love less, what he did love to see?
Should now love less what he once loved to see?
That which in him was fair and delicate,
What was beautiful and delicate in him
Was but the milk which in love's childish state
Was just the milk that nurtured love in its childish state
Did nurse it; who now is grown strong enough
Now he has grown strong enough
To feed on that, which to disus'd tastes seems tough.
To eat what seems tough to those who are unaccustomed.
 

Explanation

In 'Elegy V: His Picture,' John Donne explores themes of love, identity, and the passage of time through the metaphor of a portrait. The speaker presents his picture to his beloved as a token of remembrance, emphasizing that while it represents him now, it will take on greater significance after his death. The line 'When we are shadows both' suggests a future where both lovers are no longer alive, highlighting the transient nature of life and love.

As the poem progresses, the speaker reflects on the physical toll that time and experience will take on him, describing himself as 'weather-beaten' and 'a sack of bones.' This imagery conveys a sense of decay and vulnerability, contrasting sharply with the idealized image of love. The speaker anticipates that others may judge his beloved for loving someone who appears 'foul and coarse,' questioning whether his physical state will diminish her affection.

The emotional arc of the poem shifts from a tender farewell to a more somber reflection on mortality and change. The tone is both melancholic and introspective, as the speaker grapples with the fear of being unlovable in the face of physical deterioration. The use of metaphysical conceits, such as comparing love to nourishment ('the milk which in love's childish state'), deepens the exploration of emotional growth and maturity.

Ultimately, Donne's poem speaks to the enduring nature of love despite the ravages of time and physical change. It suggests that true affection transcends superficial appearances, inviting readers to consider the complexities of love and identity within the broader context of human experience. This work exemplifies Donne's mastery of metaphysical poetry, blending personal reflection with universal themes.

Word Dictionary142

WordIn EnglishPlain (English)Pron.
HereیہاںIn this placehīr
takeلے لوto grasp or receivetāk
myمیراbelonging to me
pictureتصویرa visual representationpikchar
thoughاگرچہin spite of the factthō
Iمیںthe speakerī
bidکہناto command or requestbid
farewellالوداعgoodbyefarewell
Thineتیراyoursthīn
inمیںinsideɪn
heartدلthe center of emotionhārt
whereجہاںin which placewher
soulروحthe spiritual essencesōl
dwellsرہتا ہےlives or residesdwels
shallہوگاwillshal
'Tisیہ ہےit is'tis
likeکی طرحsimilar tolīk
meمجھےmyself
nowابat this momentnaʊ
butلیکنhoweverbət
deadمردہnot aliveded
'twillیہ ہوگاit will'twill
beہوناto exist
moreزیادہgreater in amountmōr
Whenجبat the time thatwen
weہمthe two of us
areہیںexistār
shadowsسایےdark shapesshādōs
bothدونوںthe twobōth
thanسے زیادہcompared tothan
'twasیہ تھاit was'twas
beforeپہلےearlierbēfōr
weather-beatenموسمی اثرات سے متاثرworn by weatherwēðər-bētn
comeآؤں گاto arrivekəm
backواپسto returnbæk
handہاتھthe part of the bodyhænd
Perhapsشایدmaybepərhæps
withکے ساتھalongsidewɪð
rudeکھردراrough or unrefinedrūd
oarsپانی میں چلانے کے لئے استعمال ہونے والے چمڑےpaddles for rowingɔrz
tornپھٹاripped aparttɔrn
orیاalternativelyɔr
sunسورجthe star that gives lightsʌn
beamsکرنیںrays of lightbimz
tann'dسُوکھاmade brown by the suntænd
Myمیراbelonging to me
faceچہرہthe front part of the headfeɪs
andاورin additionænd
breastسینہthe front part of the bodybrɛst
ofکاbelonging toʌv
hairclothکھردرا کپڑاrough fabrichɛrklɔθ
headسرthe upper part of the bodyhɛd
Withکے ساتھtogether withwɪð
care'sفکر کاof worrykɛrz
rashبے وقوفیreckless or hastyræsh
suddenاچانکunexpectedsʌdən
stormsطوفانviolent weatherstɔrmz
beingہونے کے ناطےexistingbɪŋ
o'erspreadپھیلناto cover overoʊərsprɛd
body'aجسم کاof the bodybɑdi'a
sackبوریa large bagsæk
bonesہڈیاںthe hard parts of the skeletonboʊnz
brokenٹوٹا ہواdamagedbroʊkən
withinکے اندرinsidewɪðɪn
Andاورin additionænd
powder'sپاؤڈر کاof powderpaʊdərz
blueنیلاthe colorblu
stainsداغmarks or spotssteɪnz
scatter'dپھیلائے گئےspread outskætərd
onپرuponɒn
skinجلدthe outer covering of the bodyskɪn
Ifاگرin caseɪf
rivalحریفcompetitorraɪvəl
foolsاحمقidiotsfuːlz
taxتنقید کرناto criticizetæks
theeتمyouðē
to'haveمحبت کرناto have lovedtuhæv
lov'dمحبت کیlovedlʌvd
aایکoneə
manآدمیa personmæn
Soاتناto such an extentsoʊ
foulبدصورتugly or unpleasantfaʊl
coarseکھردراrough or unrefinedkɔrs
asجیسےin the same wayæz
oh,اوہan expression of surprise
mayشایدmightmeɪ
seemنظر آناto appearsiːm
then,تبat that timeðɛn
Thisیہthis thingðɪs
say,کہناto expressseɪ
whatکیاwhich thingwɒt
was,تھاused to bewəz
thouتمyouθaʊ
shaltتم کرو گےyou willʃælt
"Doکیاto askdu
hisاس کاbelonging to himhɪz
hurtsزخمinjuries or painhɜrts
reachپہنچناto arrive atriːtʃ
me?مجھے؟to me?mi
dothکرتا ہےdoesdʌθ
worthقیمتvalue or importancewɜrθ
decay?ختم ہونا؟to deteriorate?dɪˈkeɪ
Orیاalternativelyɔr
doکیاto performdu
theyوہthoseðeɪ
judgingفیصلہ کرناto evaluateˈdʒʌdʒɪŋ
mind,دماغ،the brain,maɪnd
thatکہwhichðæt
heوہthat personhi
Shouldچاہیےought toʃʊd
loveمحبت کرناto have affection forlʌv
less,کمnot as muchlɛs
didکیاperformeddɪd
toکی طرفtowardstu
see?دیکھنا؟to observe?si
Thatوہthat thingðæt
whichجوthat whichwɪtʃ
himاس میںin himhɪm
wasتھاused to bewəz
fairخوبصورتbeautifulfɛr
delicate,نازک،fragile,ˈdɛlɪkət
Wasتھاused to bewəz
theیہthe specific oneðə
milkدودھthe liquid from mammalsmɪlk
love'sمحبت کاof lovelʌvz
childishبچوں جیساlike a childˈtʃaɪldɪʃ
stateحالتconditionsteɪt
Didکیاdid performdɪd
nurseپرورش کرناto care fornɜrs
it;یہ؛this;ɪt
whoجوthat personhu
isہےexistsɪz
grownبڑا ہواhas maturedɡroʊn
strongمضبوطpowerfulstrɔŋ
enoughکافیsufficientɪˈnʌf
Toکے لئےfor the purpose oftu
feedکھاناto give foodfiːd
that,وہ،that thing,ðæt
disus'dاستعمال نہ ہونے والاnot useddɪsjuːzd
tastesذائقےflavors or preferencesteɪsts
seemsنظر آتا ہےappears to besiːmz
tough.مشکل.hard to chew.tʌf

Poet & Context

EraMetaphysical poetry, early 17th century

John Donne (1571 or 1572 – 31 March 1631) was an English poet and cleric known for his metaphysical poetry, characterized by complex imagery and philosophical themes. He served as Dean of St Paul's Cathedral and is celebrated for his innovative use of language and form.

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WhenOriginally published in 1633
WhyThe poem reflects on love, loss, and the inevitable changes that time brings, particularly in the context of a long separation.
FormElegy

Themes & More

love and separationidentity and change
metaphor: the picture symbolizes the speaker's identity and loveimagery: vivid descriptions of physical decay evoke emotional depth
Elegy V: His Picture by John Donne — Poem, Translation & Meaning