Poetry Analysis

Title: A Countdown

Original Poetry

Title: A Countdown

Into this land filled with trees and seas Singing as it smiles in awe and glee As they hum their symphony... I then wonder if I am ever free?

1: If that ever shall be... 1: さあ　1 2 3 1: You shall find the answer that you seek...

2: 1 2 3 4... 2: Through mountains and streams you sought a star to strive for 2: 5 6 7 8... 2: Like lines and shapes intertwined by fate...

1: 9 10 and beyond... 1: From dusk to dawn... WILL THE SUN ROAR asunder?! 1: For that we shall see 1 and 2: その時間終焉 (カウントダウン) は始めて!!!

1: 左か右か?　分からないさ 2: Ahhh-- even in this journey you have come so far... 2: Running and reasoning are at war... 1: For that's who you are...

To the stars... From afar... 1: You had strived into this-- As they shine this far 1 and 2: Striving running walking writing moving wondering wandering 2: Will there ever be... 1: An ending to this journey?

分からない歩くことしか知らない太陽と月。。。私の声は聞いて?

1 and 2: ラララララ 1: Into this tale where time starts to crumble... 1 and 2: ラララララ 2: Now see in awe... 1 and 2: A journey of us and you...

Translation

Into this land full of trees and seas Singing happily in amazement As they play their music... I wonder if I am ever truly free?

If that ever happens... Come on, 1 2 3 You will find the answer you are looking for...

1 2 3 4... Through mountains and streams, you searched for a star to aim for 5 6 7 8... Like lines and shapes connected by destiny...

9 10 and beyond... From night to morning... WILL THE SUN SHOUT apart?! For that we will see The countdown has begun!!!

Left or right? I don't know Ahhh-- even on this journey, you've come so far... Running and thinking are in conflict... Because that's who you are...

To the stars... From a distance... You have worked hard for this-- As they shine from afar Striving, running, walking, writing, moving, wondering, wandering Will there ever be... An end to this journey?

I don't know I only know how to walk The sun and the moon... Can you hear my voice?