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“The Breath of Life”

Original Poetry

Translation

“The Breath of Life”

My throat is as dry as a desert, yet I feel like I'm drowning.

Just when I think I'm about to come up for air, as my chest expects the salty air and my face waits for the sun that dries, I'm caught off guard.

My throat feels dry as a desert, but it feels like I’m drowning. Just when I feel like I’m about to surface, when my chest anticipates the strong salty air and my face awaits the beating down of the sun that dries, it takes me by surprise. The reminder of the reality I try to escape everyday is that same pair of lungs that beg for a breath of air. I try to suppress the feeling when I know it will never go away. My mind desires for it to be lost within the confines of that bottomless pit, where nothing is tangible and real, but my body refuses to submit to the darkness of the currents that pull me in. The mind, the consciousness of my flesh, deceives me. It tells me what I want to hear, but that same, unconscious body of mine, keeps me tethered to the same reason I breathe. He(God) is the reason I breathe. I choose to breathe for Him. And my body reminds me of this every second I get that feeling, that urge to breathe, that same feeling that my mind wants to suppress. So, I kick. I fight for that freedom my body longs for every single day, though my legs burn and ache for rest. For Him.

The reality I try to escape every day is the same lungs that beg for air.

I try to ignore the feeling, knowing it will never leave.

My mind wants it to be lost in a bottomless pit, where nothing is real, but my body won't give in to the dark currents pulling me.

The mind, the awareness of my body, tricks me.

It tells me what I want to hear, but my unconscious body keeps me connected to the reason I breathe.

He (God) is why I breathe.

I choose to breathe for Him.

And my body reminds me every time I feel the urge to breathe, the feeling my mind wants to ignore.

So, I fight.

I struggle for the freedom my body wants every day, even though my legs burn and ache for rest.

For Him.

Explanation

The poem 'The Breath of Life' delves into the internal conflict between the mind and body, illustrating a struggle that is both physical and spiritual. The speaker describes a paradoxical sensation of dryness and drowning, symbolizing a state of existential crisis. This struggle is further complicated by the mind's desire to escape reality, contrasted with the body's instinctual drive to survive. The poem highlights the role of faith and spirituality, as the speaker acknowledges God as the reason for their perseverance. Despite the mind's attempts to suppress the urge to live, the body persistently reminds the speaker of their purpose. The poem uses vivid imagery to convey the tension between the desire for freedom and the physical limitations of the body. Ultimately, it portrays a journey of resilience and faith, where the speaker chooses to fight for life, driven by a higher purpose.

Word Dictionary10

Word	In English	Plain (English)	Pron.
desert	a dry, barren area	a place with little water and vegetation	deh-zert
drowning	suffocating in water	unable to breathe due to being underwater	drow-ning
anticipates	expects	expects something to happen	an-tis-uh-pates
tangible	real, touchable	able to be touched or felt	tan-juh-buhl
submit	give in	to give in or surrender	sub-mit
deceives	tricks	tricks or misleads	deh-seevs
tethered	tied	tied or connected	teh-thurd
urge	strong desire	a strong need or desire	urj
freedom	liberty	being free	free-duhm
ache	pain	a dull, continuous pain	ayk

Poet & Context

Poet—

EraContemporary

The author of this poem is not identified in the available sources. The poem reflects contemporary themes of existential struggle and spiritual reflection.

WhenUnknown

WhyThe poem explores the existential struggle between the mind and body, emphasizing the spiritual motivation to continue living and breathing. It reflects on the internal conflict of seeking freedom and the physical and spiritual reasons for perseverance.

FormFree verse

Themes & More

Themes

Existential struggleSpiritualityMind vs. bodyPerseverance

Literary devices

Metaphor: The poem uses the metaphor of drowning to describe an overwhelming feeling.Imagery: Vivid descriptions of dryness, drowning, and the sun create a strong visual impact.Personification: The mind and body are given human-like qualities, such as deceiving and reminding.Paradox: The poem presents contradictory feelings of dryness and drowning simultaneously.