Ethereal

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Original Poetry
Translation
Feathers hold the weight of the past
Feathers carry the weight of the past
I pluck the differences from us apart
I take apart the differences between us
One side of forever doesn’t always last
Eternity on one side doesn't always last
Blood trails in my head back to the very start
Memories in my mind go back to the start
I see your reflection inside a sunrise river
I see your image in a river at sunrise
As i admire the current until the sun would set
As I watch the flow until the sun sets
I always wish i kept you closer
I always wish I kept you close
So the softness of your fingertips is something I don’t forget
So I don't forget the softness of your touch
Your eyes were an evergreen forest
Your eyes were like a forest that stays green
The butterflies would hum as i was lost inside
The butterflies would hum as I wandered inside
Like a child inside the home of a florist
Like a child in a flower shop
The sight was so beautiful i almost cried
The view was so beautiful I almost cried
A part of my world used to be ethereal
Part of my world was once heavenly
Now the feather is flying away
Now the feather is drifting away
But theres always beauty in something ephemeral
But there's always beauty in the temporary
Because some things are never meant to stay
Because some things are not meant to stay
 

Explanation

This poem, titled 'Ethereal,' explores the themes of memory, loss, and the transient nature of beauty. It opens with the metaphor of 'feathers' that 'hold the weight of the past,' suggesting that memories, though light, carry significant emotional weight. The speaker reflects on the differences that have separated them from a loved one, acknowledging that 'one side of forever doesn’t always last.' This line captures the impermanence of relationships and the lingering impact of past connections.

The imagery of a 'sunrise river' where the speaker sees a reflection evokes a sense of nostalgia and longing. The river symbolizes the passage of time, and the speaker's wish to have kept their loved one closer highlights a sense of regret. The 'softness of your fingertips' is a tactile memory that the speaker fears losing, emphasizing the importance of physical presence and touch in relationships.

The poem continues with the metaphor of 'eyes' as an 'evergreen forest,' a place of beauty and mystery where the speaker feels lost. The 'butterflies' humming adds to the enchanting and dreamlike quality of this memory. The comparison to a child in a florist's shop suggests innocence and wonder, reinforcing the emotional impact of these memories.

The poem concludes with a reflection on the ethereal nature of the speaker's world, which was once beautiful but is now changing. The 'feather' flying away symbolizes the fleeting nature of beauty and life. The poem acknowledges that while some things are ephemeral, there is beauty in their transience, suggesting an acceptance of life's impermanence and the value of cherishing moments that cannot last.

Word Dictionary6

WordIn EnglishPlain (English)Pron.
Featherssoft bird coveringssoft coverings of birdsfeth-erz
Pluckpick, removeto pull or pick off or outpluhk
Ephemeralshort-lived, temporarybrief, not lasting longih-fem-er-uhl
Reflectionimage, mirror imagea picture seen in a mirror or waterri-flek-shuhn
Evergreenalways green, lastinga tree or plant that stays green all yearev-er-green
Floristflower shop ownersomeone who sells flowersflor-ist

Poet & Context

Poet
EraContemporary

The poet of this piece is unknown, and it appears to be a contemporary work. It explores themes of memory, loss, and the transient nature of beauty.


WhenUnknown
WhyThe poem seems to explore personal themes of memory, longing, and the acceptance of impermanence. It reflects on the beauty found in fleeting moments and relationships.
FormFree verse

Themes & More

MemoryImpermanenceNostalgiaBeauty
Metaphor: 'Feathers hold the weight of the past' suggests memories are light yet burdensome.Imagery: 'Your eyes were an evergreen forest' creates a vivid and enchanting visual.Symbolism: 'Feather is flying away' symbolizes the fleeting nature of beauty and life.
Ethereal by Unknown poet — Poem, Translation & Meaning